Hello, dear readers!
A friend near and dear to my heart brought up some critical flaws with the second chapter that needed to be rectified. I agreed, wholeheartedly, and went back to revisit/polish it up.
The issue was it moved much too quickly, you see. Lithos got home much too fast. We don’t feel the dread of time’s slow passage, we don’t sense his powerlessness. So, I fixed that.
I want to thank you, Tyler, for pointing these issues out so that I could do so. I love you.
That said, please click the button at the bottom of this post to check out the changes. There are some lore-bombs and breadcrumbs in there that I’d hate for you to miss.
Thank you for reading!
‘Til Next Time,
James